Very cool shot. Def an 'A' for creativity. I see your delema here also with the castle being the brightest object in the background. Kinda makes for a tougher exposure, however you did pretty well with it. The white balance is an issue though. Not exactly sure what type of lighting was used but next time try manually setting it. Should come out a bit better. (I know you addressed that in the artist comments but thought it needed to be said) The last thing that sticks out to me is that the subject is slightly out of focus, prob due to the low shutter speed. I understand oh to well that trying to stand perfectly still for a second can be very difficult. Next time try having her lean on something so that will be easier.